Author Topic: Hospital Craze: short story  (Read 3605 times)

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June 27, 2015, 12:50:22 PM

Offline Storm_Girl

Hey, first time writing here.

 from my idea lol I know it's weird and not sure if it could happen or I'll leave it in the fantasy. I'm not good with writing so bear with me lol.

In this weird foreign hospital, she's strapped in a a strange looking barber chair. In front of her is a mirror showing a reflection of her strapped and gagged wearing a hospital apron and a man behind her carrying scissors.

Snip snip snip as he goes cutting all her hair. As she struggles through her gag crying. He shaves her hair bald. As tears rolls down her cheek from the humiliation that he was doing, she watched him take some wax and rubbing it on her bald head making it look shiny and sparkles.

A nurse walks in smiling at the scene, saying she just gave birth and here pussy is stretched for that. The victim struggling from her bond was in distress not knowing watch she meant as she struggled through her bond crying to be let go of.

The nurse removes her skirt, goes behind her and climbs on top. The victim sees in the mirror what she's doing as she sits on her bald head, but not completely putting her wait on but support with the bar handles.

She started to rub her pussy on her bald head. Getting turned on and moaning. The nurse started to drip wet.

The victim starts to cry again from the humiliation trying to struggle. But then something strange happens. The nurse had let some weight on top of the victim's head, make her pussy spread and stretch and add some more. The victim was in shock as she sees in the mirror of her pussy starting to spread around her bald head like a hat.

The nurse then placed her full weight in moaning louder as the victim started to muffle screams.

Blop! The victim's whole head is completely in her vagina.

The nurse, reaches her hand down, she rubs her clit. The victim, feeling her whole head inside a pussy, feeling the tightness and wetness, she tried crying out shaking her head.

 breathing hard and fasting, the nurse cums as the victim feels her shooting squirts on her head.

The nurse moves her body up, so the victim could see herself in the mirror and watches as the nurses goes up and down at her like she's riding a penis.

The nurse gets so turned on she rides the penis head really hard. As she came, she got up with a plop sound.

The victim being dazed on what happened and see her whole head covered in sticky gooey slime and then passes out.

Not know what next weird things they'll do to her.


Soooo what do u think? Lol

This is my first post by the way, I have so much more. Not all of them are weird lol.

Ps: I was kinda embarrassed writing this and I'm more into hetero but I do get ideas of many things. Oh and I typed this on my iPhone. So yeah lol

June 27, 2015, 01:35:12 PM
Reply #1

Offline Pirate Pete

Don't be embarrassed Storm!. I know posting your first story is like blurting out your fantasy to a total stranger, but everyone here understands, and enjoys, sharing. that's what this site is all about!
For a first story I thought it was good, let's have some more! :)

June 27, 2015, 05:37:37 PM
Reply #2

Offline Storm_Girl

Ahh thanks pirate Pete ^^

December 02, 2015, 08:56:59 AM
Reply #3

Offline Sparx

Hey Storm Girl,

I don't even know if you are still around, or visit this site anymore. I just wanted to say thank you for putting this up. I hope I don't offend you with what I have to say about Hospital Craze.

I'm pretty new to this site, but this was one of the first stories I read when I came on here, I clicked it thinking some sexy nurse action or something. But I have to say, I did not expect what you wrote. It's not a turn on for me at all, like your story makes me feel weird. I feel like I'm getting a first hand look into someone's acid nightmare. It makes me think of Silent Hill. Frankly, I think it is terrifying.

So I want to say again, I hope that doesn't offend you. I don't know where you're coming from with the story, I don't know what it means to you, or how you expect or want people to react to it. I also want to say again, thank you for posting it. I may not get out of it what it means to you, but it is one of the trippiest pieces of writing I have ever seen. If you are still around, and see this, I'd love to hear your thoughts and have you talk about Hospital Craze a bit. Like, where it came from and what it means to you.


December 30, 2015, 09:41:07 PM
Reply #4

Offline roped_wrists

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Hey, first time writing here.

 from my idea lol I know it's weird and not sure if it could happen or I'll leave it in the fantasy. I'm not good with writing so bear with me lol.

Ps: I was kinda embarrassed writing this and I'm more into hetero but I do get ideas of many things. Oh and I typed this on my iPhone. So yeah lol

Thank you for sharing!

That's the beauty of fiction -- things can happen in fiction that don't happen in reality.

As for not being good with writing -- it's not really a matter of being "good" or "bad" with it. When you were born, were you a good "walker"? Probably not. But with practice, you got better at it. Writing is the same way -- the more you do it, the better it gets!

As far as being embarrassed writing it goes -- GOOD! That feeling of embarrassment is liberation. The deeper the fantasy, the more depraved and sick it is, the more you want to push it out of you.

A story: when I first started going on Yahoo Chat Rooms back in 2004, I was feeling terrified. Here I was posting to a public audience "I'm looking for someone who wants to tie me up and rape me". In my mind, I was in for nothing but ridicule and rejection.

Do you know what I got instead?

You guessed it -- men who wanted to tie me up and rape me!

On some nights I'd have two, sometimes three roleplays going all at the same time. And it was FUN. It was LIBERATING. It felt GOOD.

It was all fantasy, so nobody was getting hurt, and it felt GOOD.

Not only was I able to indulge my rape and bondage fetish, but I found foot fetishists who wanted to play with my feet. As time progressed I discovered that not only did I like being tied up and raped, but I loved the idea of being filmed while it was happening.

Had I let that initial embarrassment dictate my actions, those fetishes would have gone concealed. I would have lost HOURS of fun. And I probably never would have discovered my fetish for being filmed.

My point?

Keep writing.

Regardless of how people react, push your interests out into the open.

Have FUN! :)