Author Topic: The new kid  (Read 1957 times)

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August 31, 2017, 01:54:18 AM

Offline TheStickyTissue

August 31, 2017, 07:21:08 PM
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Offline gscmar64

Good story! If I may suggest something to you- try breaking this wall of words down into paragraphs, it would make it easier to read for most readers!