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December 27, 2017, 04:00:36 PM

Offline vile8r

WARNING!    You must be 18 or over to read these stories of rape and non-consensual sex.  This particular story features characters under the age of 18.  If you do not like such stories, please stop reading. This story is all fiction and no characters in it are meant to resemble any real person.  If you do not understand the difference between reality and fantasy, read no more. Rape is a heinous crime and the penalty is many years in prison. The people who commit rape are despised everywhere. No one is being hurt, and this is pure fantasy.

Part of this story is technically not mine. I have not stolen it. A friend had found it on another site quite a long time ago. However, my friend felt that the story was lacking in some detail and wanted me to spice it up. So I wrote the gangrape scene which happens and also added a bit of detail in the earlier rape scene.

NOTE: The original author of this story is Lttlebree. She has given her blessing and permission for me to post this story. My thanks to Lttlebree.

Neptune Beach

A story by Lttlebree and Vile8r

gangrape, noncon, oral, anal, violence

You've seen TV shows and movies about childhood vacations by some lake in the Catskills. Every one of them looks the same. There's a wacky dad, crazy adventures and sweet fleeting romances that make old people all weepy and nostalgic. The people who write them want you to watch and think "gosh, that looks so relaxing and pleasant"?

Those are all bullshit.
Cabins in the Catskills smell like wet dog, and they're full of gross bugs. There's no TV, no movies and no boys who aren't like 50 years old. There's a lake, if you like swimming in brown water, and there's a beach with no sun and even more bugs.

My best friend Nikki and me got dragged up to that cabin every summer since we were 7 years old because our parents thought it was like the awesomest most relaxing thing ever. We rented the same two cabins right next to each along the edge of the big brown lake for two loooong boring weeks. My uncle and his kids and the family of one of our other neighbors rented the other two cabins in the cluster, so we were always with the same bunch of people out by the lake. Every single year.

This year we begged and pleaded for them to just leave us home. Our friend Erin had even talked her parents into letting us stay at their house the whole time so they wouldn't worry. We were 14 years old, for God's sake; we were way too old to spend two weeks playing Marco Polo with the kids in the lake! But they hadn't budged and we ended up there just like every year.

"You girls aren't gonna swim?" asked Nikki's dad, Mr. Cooper, as he walked out on the dock. The beach didn't get any actual sun, so Nikki and me were laying in our bikinis out on the long dock, where there was sort of sun but not really.

"Don't feel like it," Nikki said without flinching or lowering her sunglasses.
"Yeah," I agreed, trying my best to sound miserable.

"Come on now, girls," he said as he exhaled. Mrs. Cooper made him walk out on the lake to smoke, so he only came out there for his cigarettes. "You can't be miserable the whole trip! There's lots of stuff to do."

"Like what?" I asked.

"Well," he thought for a minute. He was going to say 'swim' because that was, literally, the only thing there was to do. He just already said that so he needed to think of something else. "You could fish," he said.

"Ick," said Nikki.

"Or, um," Mr. Cooper was sweating. He'd insisted, when we protested at home, that we would have fun up here, and we were calling his bluff. "You could take the boat out. You girls are old enough to handle her on your own I think."

We both perked up at this. "The boat" was just an old canoe, but they'd never let us use it by ourselves before. It wasn't a car, but it was freedom. Sort of.

"Really?" Nikki asked, skeptical.

"Sure," he said, "I don't see why not."

We eagerly accepted the offer. I actually expected my parents and Mrs. Cooper to veto the idea, but Mr. Cooper was locked in and we weren't going to let him forget it. Our moms buckled easy, once we promised to keep our life jackets on, and my dad was won over by Mr. Cooper's rationalizing, when he thought we were out of earshot, that a little time on the lake "might work the bitch out of 'em." I didn't appreciate being called a bitch, but I wasn't going to make a fuss about it then.

Lake Papageorge is as big as it is brown, but it didn't take us long to get paddled out of sight of the beach and to ditch our clothes. Like any self-respecting teenage girls, we'd packed two bikinis—the ones our parents knew about and the ones they'd never let us wear. We'd covertly slipped into the skimpy ones beneath our t-shirts, shorts and lifejackets before we'd shoved off. If there was any chance of meeting boys or getting a decent tan, the other ones just wouldn't do.

We'd only just stripped down when a motorboat full of older guys slowed down to hoot and holler at us. "Show us your tits!" they called, and we both giggled. I thought Nikki might actually do it, but she chickened out and they zipped away. I didn't think they'd want to see my little boobs, but Nikki had amazing big breasts for 14 and guys were always salivating over them. She had nice tan Italian skin like her mom, and a really cute body, but the only thing guys ever noticed were her big boobs. In her little yellow and white bikini, they looked particularly good, and I was super jealous.

"Wow," she said. "They were cute. I can't believe they stopped to look at us!"
I laughed at her. "Oh my God, of course they did. Guys have like Nikki-boob radar!"

Nikki blushed but she didn't deny it.
We drifted a little further. Our cabins were on a private inlet that dipped in for about a mile, but the bigger lake was a lot more crowded. It was a Saturday, so there was lots of boaters out for the weekend with all kinds of people in them. We saw a couple of other canoes, but mostly they were all lots bigger.

There were lots of guys!

After a while, we stopped even noticing guys who slowed down to look at us or whistle. Some of them offered us beer and lots more wanted us to come on their boats. It was sexy, but we didn't because we saw a police boat float by and didn't want to get in trouble.

"Where you girls heading?" asked one guy, as he and his friends drifted up beside us. They were college boys or in their early 20s, shirtless and very hot.
"Don't know," I said. "What about you?"

"Aww, was hopin' a couple of fine little honeys like you was heading for Neptune beach."

"Quit the cradle robbing, Danny," said his friend, a little annoyed.
He smiled at me. At me! "Aw come on, Robbie," he said, his big brown eyes still fixed on mine. "You ain't no baby, are you blondie?"

I'm sure I blushed. "Nope," I said sheepishly, "Not a baby."

He laughed. "See, Robbie? She ain't no baby." Then he winked, "Up beyond those trees on the left. Don't be shy. Bring that little friend of yours back there, too."
"Okay," I said, feeling tingly and shy.

"I'm Danny, by the way."
It took me a minute to think of my line. "I'm Emily," I finally managed.

"Pleased to meet you," he shouted as he and his friends drifted away towards the trees.
Nikki laughed at me. "You're drooling," she said.

"Am not," I said.
"I'm not a baby, Danny" she teased in a little baby voice.
"You're just mad he was looking at me and not you," I snapped.
"They all look at you, too, you know."

Apparently Nikki was oblivious to these things. "Wanna check out their beach?" I asked.
"They're probably just going over there to get drunk and stuff," she said. "I don't know."
"Come on," I said, "they were cute."

"Yeah, but they were like 21 or something. They don't want to hang out with us."
"He told us to come," I said.
"Yeah, but, he probably couldn't tell how old you were from far away."

"It was only a few feet."
Nikki rolled her eyes. She knew how stubborn I could be, and she knew I was going to win if she kept arguing. "Just a little while, ok?"
"Of course," I said.

We paddled off towards the trees, around the bend where Danny and his boat had disappeared. It took us a good 45 minutes in our canoe, but eventually we pulled around into an inlet a lot like the one our cabins were on. It wasn't as big as ours, maybe a quarter mile, but there weren't any cabins on it that we could see, just trees. At the far end we could see boats all pulled onto the beach or anchored, so we paddled that way.

There weren't people on the beach that we could see, but we definitely heard voices coming from further inland.
"Why are they all up there?" Nikki asked.
"I don't know ... want to go look?"

"Not really," she teased.
We pulled our canoe onto the beach and put our flip flops on and grabbed our beach towels for the walk up the wood-plank path towards the voices. It was a lot longer walk than we expected, and the noise kept getting louder. "Wow," said Nikki as we came to the edge of the woods onto what looked like a bigger sandier beach on the opposite side. "Sounds like a lot of people!"

We pushed through a little further and found ourselves on actual sand, not the rocks on most of the lake beaches. It was a big expanse of real beach, full of real people.
"Oh my god," said Nikki, "Everyone is like totally naked!"

Well, not everyone. Not even close really, but there were a few. Some of the girls were topless, and others were running around completely naked. But they weren't ALL naked.
We darted back into the woods before someone saw us.

"We have to go!" Nikki exclaimed, though she was staring back out at the beach.
"We don't have to," I said.
"Kids our age aren't supposed to be at places like this," she said.

"Why not?" I asked, "We went skinny dipping that time at Rhonda's house."
"That was a slumber party. This is like ... public!"

I rolled my eyes, trying my best to be so-very-mature. "We don't have to take our clothes off. Hardly anybody else is. Let's just hang out."

I bit my lip. I knew she was right, and we probably shouldn't be hanging around out there—it was the sort of party our parents would flip if they knew we were here. But I was just too excited not to hang around a little while. I loved the way Danny had looked at me before, and all those guys who whistled at us in our little bikinis. I wanted more of it.

"Come on," I pleaded again "just a little bit. If they tell us to leave we will."
Nikki hesitated. "You promise?"
"Yes!" I said.

"Ok, just a little bit." Nikki relented. She was smiling now too, so I knew I wasn't the only one who was excited.

We tried to act confident as we strode out onto the sand, but we were definitely out of place and you could probably tell we were nervous. Everyone was older than us, but the guys weren't shy about leering as we passed. It was sort of wild, because there were other girls there who were older and really pretty, and totally topless, but guys still looked at us.

Two Hispanic guys came up on each side of us and starting talking. "You girls are looking good," said one. He was in his 20s, muscular and tanned all over. "Come here a lot?"

"It's our first time," I said.
"Should've known," he said, "love the tan lines!"

I blushed. The black and white-striped bikini I had on was so much smaller than the one I normally wore at home that you could make out all of the tan lines all over my pale skin.
"You gotta great body," he said, sort of whispering to me. His friends—two of them—were chatting up Nikki, and even though they were way over a foot taller than her they didn't even pretend like they were looking at her face.

"Thanks," I said shyly, unsure what the appropriate response was.

"Most blonde girls have like dark hair down below, you know? I really like girls that are blonde all over. You blonde all over?"

Now I really didn't know what to say! It was getting sort of embarrassing, but if I was letting on he obviously couldn't tell.
We wandered as a group close to the edge of the water and sat down, spreading our towels out. We lay down and our entourage circled around.
"You got a boyfriend?" My boy, who called himself Julio, asked.

I should've said yes, but I wasn't thinking quite right. "Nope," I said.
"I gotta girlfriend," he said, "but she's not as pretty as you." He lay down beside me and propped his head up one arm. "You wanna be my new girlfriend?"

I had absolutely no idea what to say to that, and I was even more speechless when he brazenly put his hand on my hip. Next to me Nikki half shouted protest as the two boys each got a handful of breast and started squeezing. "Whoa..." she said, but one of them just started kissing her and they both kept groping.

I turned to help but Julio laid on top of me and stuffed his tongue in my mouth while he forced his hand between my legs, tugging feverishly at the thin bikini bottom. I panicked. This couldn't be happening in front of all of these other people, could it?

Julio was way bigger than me. No matter how hard I struggled, I couldn't even manage to make enough fuss to make it clear that I wanted him off. God knows what they were doing to Nikki, because I couldn't even turn my head to see.

"Hey homes, that's my girl," someone shouted.
I didn't even know they were talking to us until Julio lifted his head to shout back.

"Get lost, man," said Julio. "These chicks are taken."
"I know," said the voice, "They're taken by me. You got a problem with that?"

I couldn't see what was happening because Julio had me pinned, but very suddenly he lifted off and stood up. His friends did likewise, and just like that they ran away from us.

Danny, the guy we met on the boat, was standing over me smiling down, and he had four hulking friends standing behind him. "Emily! You made it!"
"Oh my God, thank you soooooo much," said Nikki before I could even manage to speak. "I was so scared, you have no idea!" She was covering her breasts with her forearm and one hand, holding the tattered remnants of her bikini top in the other. Those guys had apparently ripped it in half.

"No problem," said Danny. "Them boys should know better than to get fresh with my girls. You two wanna come party with us over here? We got the grill going."

Nikki didn't even need convincing this time, and we both answered "Yes!" in unison. Danny and the boys led us around a bend to a wider beach that was less sunny but also less crowded. They had a barbeque grilling and were working on setting up a volleyball net.

I could see Nikki was still quivering a little, and I sort of understood. All Julio did was kiss me and feel me up, but his friends had already begun tearing her clothes off and there was no doubt what they had had in mind. "You ok?" I asked.
"Yeah," she said, softly. "Guess I am now. 'Cept for the suit."

I giggled at her. "Just go topless," I suggested. "Other girls are."

"You gotta do it with me," she taunted.

I knew she was toying with me, and certain I wouldn't do it. To be fair, I probably wouldn't have any other time but I was still charged up with adrenaline from what just happened, and still turned on by the way guys were looking at us so openly. "Ok," I said, grinning naughtily as I unsnapped the top and lifted it over my head without hesitating. I tossed it over a branch and made a point of not covering my boobs up. "Fair?" She just giggled and dropped her own hands.

We tossed our towels down in a sunny spot on "their" beach, but mostly hung around with Danny and the guys by the grill. They told us they were from New Jersey but came up here because Robby's uncle had a big house on the lake and he let them use it to chill out.

They even had hard lemonade drinks that they gave us and nobody else because they said they were only for pretty girls. Guys had to drink beer. I never drank hard lemonade before, but after the first couple of sips it tasted like regular lemonade, and way better than beer.

Robby had a cell phone in the boat, and we used it to call our parents. We met some kids our age, we told them. They were having a camp fire and can we please stay out a little late? It took a lot of begging and reassurances that we had a headlight for our canoe, but they eventually agreed. It was super awkward to be talking to my dad while I was sitting topless on a beach full of older guys, but I got over it. Everything was finally working out!

It wasn't long after we finally ate that they were ready for volleyball. "You guys in?" Someone asked. Both Nikki and me were sitting on logs by the grill and talking to Danny.
"Think I'll pass, man," said Danny.

"Me too!" I said, maybe a little too quickly. I wanted to keep talking to Danny. "But Nikki's an awesome volleyball player."

She shot a nasty look in my direction, but unhappily took the hint. "Yeah," she said, "I'll play." I felt a little bad, but I wasn't thinking super straight after two bottles of the lemonade. I just knew my stomach was full of butterflies every time I caught Danny sneaking a glance at my naked boobs and I wanted to be alone with him.

Danny sipped his beer and looked fondly in my direction. "I'm really glad you girls made it out here," he said.
I smiled back at him. "Me too!"

He stood from his deck chair and sat down beside me on the log. "My buddies all like your little friend," he said, as we both watched them picking teams. Nikki's boobs would certainly liven up a volleyball game. "Me, though, I think you're like the prettiest girl out here!"

He managed to make me blush, and I wasn't sure what to say back. I just twirled my hair nervously and looked down at my feet as I tried not to giggle. He put his hand on mine and squeezed it tight. Then he leaned in and kissed me, very soft and sweet right on the lips.
"Sorry," he said. "I'm not usually that forward. You're just too beautiful to resist."

It was like he was living to make me blush. "Don't be sorry," I whispered. "I liked it."
He kissed me again, this time moving his hands around to the small of my back and the back of my neck so that he could pull me in closer. I felt his tongue in my mouth and I didn't stop it. We kissed for a long while and then finally broke to take a breath. We both giggled now, just a little.

"It's almost sunset," he said. "If we sneak around those rocks we can see it reflecting off the water. You want to walk? It'd be romantic."
My heart was fluttering and my knees were quivering. How could I possibly say no? It was just so perfect. "Of course," I said, "I'd love to."


December 28, 2017, 01:38:48 PM
Reply #1

Offline vile8r

He put a bottle of wine in a backpack and we were off. He held my hand sweetly and led me along the bank of the lake just around the bend and back out again. We had to jump over some boulders, which was awkward without shoes, but Danny helped me and made sure I didn't fall.

On the other side of the rocks, we were alone on the beach and could see out across the lake to where the sun was just starting to turn the sky pink. It wasn't a perfect sunset, but it was a perfect moment.

"Just watch," he said as he stood behind me and pointed out over the water. I felt him around me, so much taller and bigger and stronger. He had his hands on my shoulders, and we watched the sun, but all I wanted to do was turn around and kiss him again.

He wrapped his strong arms around me, and I kissed his forearm softly. I could feel his strong abs and pecs on my back, and I almost giggled as I felt the soft stiffness of his cock against my back. He stroked my arm softly, and slid his hand down my stomach, caressing me gingerly and every so often nibbling the back of my neck or my earlobe. It was so romantic!

Oh so casually, he moved his hand lower and beneath the waist band of my bikini to cup my pussy. I didn't stop him, but I got a little nervous. Older guys just move a little faster, I reminded myself.
He kept his hand there as we watched the sun sinking lower. He dipped a finger into my vagina and sent chills up and down my spine (in a good way). He must have enjoyed it too, because I could feel him getting extra hard.

Before the sun finished setting, he'd turned me around and we were kissing again. It was so crazy! I couldn't believe a hot, sweet older guy like him was actually attracted to me! He rubbed my shoulders softly as he laid me down in the sand, and looked longingly into my eyes. He slid my bikini bottom down and off my legs. I couldn't believe I was there completely naked on the beach with this gorgeous guy. My heart was leaping!
"Spread your legs," he said.

He caught me off guard. "What?"
"Spread your legs," he said again. "So I can fuck you."

I was shocked. It was so frank and crude. "I don't want to do that," I said. "Let's just kiss more, please?"
He wrapped his hand in my hair and yanked it hard. "Open your fucking legs," he snarled. The sensitive loving Danny had turned cold and angry. He forced his weight between my knees and literally pried my legs apart.

"Danny, don't," I pleaded. "Please!"
"Just relax and I won't hurt you," he said. I could feel his cock bobbing against my vulnerable naked pussy.
"You can't, please! I've never done this before." I started to sob.

"Good," he said, as he pressed all his weight down on my chest and adjusted his position between my legs. "I haven't had a cherry in months! Good thing I got there before Julio popped you, eh?"
"I said no, Danny! I'll scream!"

"Scream all you want, bitch, I'm still gonna fuck you." He was squeezing my arms so hard they hurt. I couldn't believe he kept at it while I cried.
I felt the large head of his cock poking into my pussy, but he couldn't push all the way in because I was too dry. He shifted his weight again so that he could hold me in place with one arm, and began roughly kneading my pussy. The sand on his hands hurt, and he wasn't being gentle anymore. His dry fingers ached inside me as he forced them in. I was shocked when I felt myself get wet—it didn't feel good at all!

"About fucking time," he muttered, like he was angry at me for not being ready to be raped.
"Don't do this!" I pleaded again, my voice barely audible.
"Keep begging, slut," he said. "I like that." I felt his cock parting my lips, and the alien sensation of a strange appendage sliding into my vagina. It felt like he was forcing a bat up into me. My little pussy was stretching around it, and it hurt.

That first thrust was long and slow, and he seemed to go impossibly deep inside of me. I felt something literally rip inside me as he burst my hymen. Then he slipped almost all the way back and thrust forward again, harder and faster so that he slammed hard against me.


 I screamed so loud that someone must have heard, but no one came running. Danny just laughed and began to fuck me furiously.
I don't know how long it went on for. It felt like hours, but was probably minutes. Every stroke hurt as he pounded, stretched and filled me with his unwelcome cock. He punctuated the cruel thrusting by yanking my hair or roughly pawing at my breasts. Worse than all that were the things he said. He called me names, "jailbait cunt", "dumb little whore", "cumbucket", "stupid slut", and every variation of "bitch". He told me, through heavy breathing, how dumb I was to come out here, how he couldn't believe how easy I was to trick. He told me I must have wanted to get raped.

I cried the whole time. I tried to block it all out, just drift away, but he kept forcing me back by making a point of hurting me more. Then he yanked my hair hard and pounded his hips forward all at once, and as he groaned out loud his whole body tensed. I could feel the warm sensation in my pussy, and I knew he'd cum in me. The terrible realization that he might be getting me pregnant right then hit me hard, and I wanted to die.

He collapsed down on top of me then, pinning me in place but not saying a word. I could still feel his cock throbbing inside of me, not moving but there, as it slowly grew soft. My whole body hurt, from the parts he'd torn open to the limbs that had struggled in vain to wrestle him off.
It was several more minutes before he finally rolled off of me, but he didn't let go of my arm. He wasn't going to let me run. "That was amazing," he said with a big grin.

I couldn’t believe what had just happened to me. My virginity, that I was hoping to save for some special guy some day, had been ripped and torn away from me by this….this…animal! I didn’t know what to feel at the moment. I was both heartbroken beyond belief and furious at myself. Furious that I had insisted to Nikki that we come to this party when I knew very well it was something we should have stayed far away from. Also furious at myself for being so naïve. This guy was like 6-7 years older than me! What the hell was I thinking? I should have known he would have one thing and one thing only on his mind!

"Fuck you," I snapped.

  "You already did, bitch." He yanked me towards him and kissed me on the lips. He tasted so gross to me now.
"Let me go," I sobbed, "I want to go home. And I want to find Nikki!”
"Later," he said.

 At almost the same time I said that, I heard a high piercing scream coming from back up the beach. I knew that scream! It was Nikki! She was in trouble too!
 “Nikki!” I called out. “Wh-what the hell are they doing to her?”

 “That’s none of your concern, Emily,” Danny smirked. “I’m guessing the boys got tired of watching those jugs of hers bouncing around playing volleyball and decided they wanna play a different game. But you just worry about keeping me happy.”

December 29, 2017, 10:13:02 AM
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Offline vile8r

 My blood ran cold as I heard Nikki scream again. My mind raced as I could only imagine in my darkest nightmares what was happening to her.
Danny reached into the backpack, the one in which he'd so sweetly packed a bottle of wine for our romantic walk earlier, and pulled out a knife. My blood ran cold and every muscle tensed.

He let go of my arm, finally, but I was too terrified to run. "Are you going to kill me?" I asked, certain that he might.
He looked at me like the question was insulting. "That’d be a waste of good pussy, bitch." With the knife still in hand, he stood up over me. "Do you know how to suck dick?"

I shook my head no.
"Time to learn then, cunt," he said, "and if you bite me, I'll cut off your tits."
I'd never sucked a boy's penis before. It always sounded so gross. They peed out of there! But with Danny standing over me with that big knife, I knew I didn't have a choice. "Get sucking!" he shouted when I paused too long, and I hurriedly wrapped my lips around his limp cock.

His dick was caked with cum, blood, sunscreen and sand, a gross mixture that made me gag as soon as I rested it on my tongue. It took all of my willpower to keep from vomiting, but I knew he'd be furious if I didn't keep sucking.

"Look up at me when you suck," he barked, and I did. He was stroking the knife, grinning down at me wickedly. Would he really kill me? I didn't know. I didn‘t know what he was capable of doing.  After all he'd already raped me.

It was a long while before he started to stiffen in my mouth. As his cock grew, he put his hands behind my head and moved it back and forth, trying to force himself into my throat. With my throat blocked, I started to gag and he pulled back, but he laughed at my discomfort.
"Little slut like you oughta know how to suck better," he said. "How old are you anyway?"

He pulled my head off long enough to answer. "Fourteen," I said.
"Fuuuck," he said as he dipped back into my mouth, "just a little baby out here. No wonder you were so tight."
 Finding out I was only 14, seemed to excite him as I felt him get even harder.

For a few more minutes he fucked my face silently, then, with his erection large and steely hard, he pulled back out and shoved me to the ground. "On your hands and knees," he said.
Maybe I paused too long catching my breath, or maybe I just looked confused, but he got mad. "Crawl, bitch, now!"

I rolled onto my hands and knees like I was going to crawl, but he never said where. "My, my," he said, "that's a fine looking ass. Wiggle it for me." I shook my butt to his apparent satisfaction.
He stood behind me and spit on my butt, then spit on his hand. Even after all that had happened, I thought that was gross, but not as gross as when he rammed two fingers into my ass hole. Not only was that gross, it hurt! I screamed out loud, despite my best efforts to not make him angry. For a long several moments, he pistoned his two fingers in and out of my saliva slicked anus, but the pain didn't stop.

Finally he knelt down behind me and I girded myself to be raped again. "This is going to hurt a lot," he said, less as a warning and more as a promise. I was shocked to feel him positioning his cock at the back of my ass, not my pussy. It never even occurred to me before then that guys would want a girl that way—it was something gay men did—but as I screamed in agony he shoved his cock into my tender asshole and sodomized me with the savage abandon of a man who thrives on little girls' pain.

The pain was unreal. I only wish I could come up with the words to describe it properly. There just aren't any. Even after having my virginity raped away, this was unbearable. I can't even remember the things he said to me while he did it, because I couldn't hear over my own screaming. It was a relief when he finally came and pulled out.

Finally without dick in me, I tried to collapse but he scolded me and made me stay in that prone position while he recovered. I expected him to fuck me again, and I was terrified.
"Let's go back," he finally said, almost nonchalantly. I was shocked, but didn't wait to scramble to my feet.

Our walk back was mostly in silence, at least from my end. What could I say?
Danny, though, took the opportunity to tell me what happened to little girls who didn't know when to shut up. "You saw how quick those little 'spics ran off earlier, right?" He asked, "You don't fuck with me. If you think you hurt now, you have no idea. I'll make you and every one you know hurt like that, bitch. You don't want that."

I didn't even care anymore. I wanted to be home, bored on the dock. I wanted a shower.
There was a camp fire burning on the beach as we wandered back. Danny's friends leered at me with knowing smirks, and tossed their friend a beer.

"Good times, Danny boy?" one of them asked, staring at me.
   I was naked with blood and cum still leaking out of me and smeared on the insides of my thighs. I’m sure I looked like hell. They all knew what happened. But they didn't care.

"Great times," Danny said, smirking. He smacked my ass. "Blondie here let me pop all three holes, didn't you, slut?" They all laughed and I just stood there dying a little more.

“Shit, I ain’t been laid in ages!” said another of the guys. He was shorter than Danny but very stocky and muscular.
I remembered Danny calling him Todd. Todd stood up from the log he was sitting on. “You get all the fun, Danny! I‘d give my left nut to tap a cute little bitch like her,” he said.

“Yeah, me too,” piped up another of Danny’s friends. I knew his name was Wes. I had noticed him when we first ran into the guys on the lake and had thought he looked pretty hot. “Lookin’ at her has got me rock-hard! I wanna get fucked tonight!”

Then I saw the one called Robbie. He had blondish-brown hair and sort of reminded me of Liam Hemsworth  from “The Hunger Games” movie. His eyes were hungrily scanning my naked body.
“Well Danny, I gave you a hard time earlier about robbing the cradle, but I gotta say, if this is what robbing the cradle’s all about, count me in!”

A fourth guy joined in too with the sick comments. I hadn’t seen him before and so didn’t know his name. He was really tall and skinny and had a face with a horrible case of acne. As we would say in school, a real “pizza-face”! In my view he was kind of repulsive.

  “Most of the girls around here are too stuck up to even talk to a guy,” he whined. “We aren’t gonna get fucked on this beach unless we just take it!”

 Well look at yourself, I thought with sarcasm, It’s no wonder no girl will talk to you! You’re gross!

I was standing there, still in a daze and not fully comprehending the things these guys were saying. Then I saw Danny give a shrug of his shoulders and he just sort of jerked his thumb in my direction.

“Well, go ahead then. She’s free for the ridin’ as far as I’m concerned. I’ve had my fun with her! I‘m having a beer,” he said in a matter-of-fact voice.

December 30, 2017, 10:44:00 AM
Reply #3

Offline vile8r

All four guys stood up and began walking toward me. They had this hungry look in their eyes and I could see they all had large bulges in the fronts of their shorts. A cold ball of fear formed in my stomach. I didn’t like this at all.
  I turned to Danny and saw he was walking away towards the bonfire. He looked over his shoulder and laughed.

“What?” he said. “You want me to help you? You’re on your own, chicky! Maybe next time, you and your friend, little Miss Big-Tits, will be more careful about who you party with!”

I turned to start running. But it was no use. My legs were still weak from before and I couldn’t get any traction in the sand. The guys were on top of me in no time. Robbie grabbed me by the arm and spun me around.

“Where the fuck do you think you’re going, slut? You wanted to party with the big boys and now we’re giving you the chance!” he said.

I tried to swing at him with my free arm, dropping my bikini bottoms I was holding onto. He blocked my arm easily and twisted it up behind my back. I screamed out in pain.

“Don’t get tough, little bitch. Things will not go good for you!” Robbie snarled.
 He gave me a big shove and pushed me toward Todd. Todd wrapped his big arms around me, one of his hands closing around my left tit. He squeezed hard.

“Come on! Let’s take her to your van, James!” Todd yelled. “I don’t wanna fuck in the sand.”

“You bet! Let’s go!” replied Pizza-face guy. Apparently, I discovered, his name was James.

I was terrified and crying as I was half-carried, half-dragged across the beach towards an old, beat-up white camper van parked in a grove of trees. I couldn’t believe this was happening to me. Not only had Danny just ripped away my virginity from me, now I was going to be gang-raped by a bunch of drunken college boys! I thought shit like this only happened in the movies? How could Nikki and I had been so stupid to come here?
  A thought suddenly popped into my head. Where the hell was Nikki? I had heard her screaming earlier, but now I didn’t see her anywhere. I was sick to my stomach imagining what fate had befallen her. I hoped it wasn’t the same thing that was about to happen to me!
  Todd’s thick arm was holding me tight around the waist as he pulled me towards the van. Pizza-face had already reached the van and thrown open the side door. I was hauled inside and Todd threw me down on the bed at the rear of the camper van.

  The air was knocked out of me, I was thrown down so hard. I tried to scream but nothing came out but gasps. Pizza-face climbed on the bed and grabbed my arms, pinning them down above my head. There was pandemonium inside the close quarters of the van as I felt Todd and Wes grab my legs and yank them apart painfully wide.
  With the three men holding me down, I was rendered helpless. I could see Robbie pulling down his shorts, exposing a large erection, at least 8 inches long. He was bigger than Danny had been. I couldn’t believe he was going to put that large thing in me!
   Robbie loomed over me, his body blocking out the light. I felt him as he lined his cock up at my pussy entrance and then dug his hands into my hips. I screamed out in pain as Robbie entered me. I was partly lubricated from the cum still in me from Danny’s rape but my vagina was not prepared for something that big and hard spreading me apart.
   The screams didn't bother him though. They only aroused him more. Being deliberately brutal, Robbie pumped his engorged cock in and out of my tight cunt, wanting to degrade and humiliate me with each thrust. Just like Danny, he called me names like ‘cunt‘, ‘slut‘, ‘whore‘, his voice low and menacing.
  My head was reeling, tears were now flowing freely down my cheeks. For a moment I wondered if I was really awake or just caught up in some terrible nightmare from which I could not wake up. About 10 minutes had passed; beads of sweat were starting to form on Robbie's forehead as he vigorously slammed in and out of me. It felt like he was going right up into my stomach. Finally, with a grunt he thrust himself into me hard, right up to the hilt, just as he came.

  "Next," he called out with a laugh as he slipped out of me. Robbie took Wes’ place and helped Todd hold me down as Wes took his turn between my legs. Still wet from the load that Robbie had just dumped inside me, Wes slid into me easily.
   In another place, in another time, I would have willingly let Wes fuck me. He was hot! But now he was raping me like a depraved animal, thrusting in, pulling back, then driving in again. The pain was horrible!
    Brutally, he grabbed onto my breasts, squeezing them roughly as he stabbed into me with his rock hard seven-inch cock. I winced in pain with each thrust. He bit down on my nipples hard causing me to shriek in pain. Harder, faster he pumped in and out of me, like a machine. I begged him to stop.
   That was when he did something really sick! Feeling himself getting ready to cum, Wes pulled out of me and he gave his cock a couple of good strokes before shooting his hot cum all over my tits. It was totally gross!

    Wes pulled out and got up off me. He high-fived Todd and said, “She’s all yours, man! Do your damage!“

As Todd let go of my one leg to take his turn with me, I started kicking and screaming, trying to get loose. Pizza-face slapped me hard with the palm of his hand across my face, knocking me into submission.

“Settle down, bitch! Or we tie you up and get really rough with you!“ Pizza-face yelled.

With my face stinging where Pizza-face had slapped me and my throat sore from screaming, I realized that it was no use to continue to struggle. These guys were going to do to me whatever they wanted, and there was nothing I could do about it. If I made them mad, there was no telling what could happen to me!
 Realizing that it was no longer necessary to hold me down, Todd instructed Pizza-face and Robbie to let me go. He wanted to fuck me doggie style, he said. He grabbed my legs and flipped me over, forcing me to go on my hands and knees. I bit down on my bottom lip as I prepared for my abused pussy to endure the intrusion of yet another cock.
  Kneeling behind me, Todd clung to my waist, squeezing so hard with his fingers that you could see on my skin where his fingers had been.


 I let out a loud scream as he suddenly and viciously entered me, shoving my whole body forward. Todd’s cock was about seven and a half inches long but very thick. Large purple veins ran along the shaft. The fat head of his cock was like a tennis ball being shoved inside me as it spread me open and drove in. He began to thrust in and out of me like a madman, burying his cock to the hilt inside my cunt each time. He called me names and laughed at me as he fucked away.
  Todd grabbed a fist full of my blonde hair and pulled my head back towards him.

“Gonna ride you like a pony!” he growled.

 I cried out with pain. Silently, I began to pray that he would cum soon. Each time he pumped into me it felt like someone was taking a knife to my insides. I could literally feel the veins on his cock scraping along the insides of my pussy.

"You fucking dirty little whore." Todd said as he felt himself getting ready to cum.

 "You fucking cock teaser."

 He continued to pump in and out of me faster, my body being pushed across the bed. Suddenly, my legs and arms gave out on me and I collapsed on my stomach. Todd dropped the weight of his body on me as he came inside my pussy.

"God, this cunt's got a tight pussy." he said to no one in particular.

 He left me laying there on the bed, cum and blood seeping out of my abused pussy and down my inner thighs. I was in a total daze as I felt someone grab my arm and roll me onto my back again. It was Pizza-face!
  My stomach heaved a little as I realized that my ordeal was not over. It was Pizza-face’s turn! As horrible as this had already been, the thought of having him rape me was truly repulsive.
  He yanked down his shorts, exposing his erect eight-inch cock. It was long and skinny and pale-looking. James hooked his arms behind my knees and pushed my legs back as he lowered himself down on me.

“All right,” he sneered. “Gonna get me some young teenage cunt!”

He had his mouth right next to my left ear, breathing hard against the side of my face as he plunged himself into me.

“UUUUGGGGHHHHHHHHH!” he grunted loudly as he shoved his whole length into me. “Holy shit, honey, you are tight! You are gonna be a good fuck!”

He held himself inside me, grinding his hips against me. Then he pulled back so he was almost out and rammed in again.


He licked me on the side of my face with his gross tongue as he began to pound in and out, driving my body down into the mattress. I could hear the other guys cheering him on.

“Fuck ‘er, James!”

“Drive the little bitch! Pound her hard!”

He took my legs and placed them on his shoulders. Then he pushed ahead so my body doubled over at the waist and my knees were almost on either side of my head. The next ten minutes or so were hell as he alternated between short, rapid thrusts and long, brutal pounding strokes. He licked and sucked on my face, forcing his tongue from time to time into my mouth. His rough, acne-ridden skin rubbing against my cheeks made me shudder with disgust.
  He grunted and panted loudly.

“P-p-please! S-stop!” I sobbed. “Get off m-m-me!”

“Oh listen to the little baby,” sneered Pizza-face. “Poor baby doesn’t like to get fucked! Likes to tease but doesn’t like to put out! Just hold it a sec, I’ll give you something to whine about, honey!”

He sped up his tempo, his balls slapping hard against me. He threw back his head and howled like a wolf, “AAAAA-WHOOOOOOOO!” as he felt his cock unload in me.

January 02, 2018, 10:43:32 AM
Reply #4

Offline vile8r

 He slipped out of me, a string of cum still dangling from the head of his cock. I was very relieved to have the disgusting pig off of me. But I had a feeling my nightmare wasn’t over yet. In a few minutes my fears were confirmed.
Robbie and Wes flipped me on my stomach again and pulled me back so my ass was hanging over the edge of the bed.

“Sweet ass, huh?” asked Robbie.

“That was one of the first things I noticed about her when she came to the beach,” replied Todd. “Gotta love little teen asses!”

Todd reached out and gave me a hard slap across the ass. I yelped out loud. He laughed and gave me another slap. Soon all four guys were taking turns smacking my ass hard with their hands. Each time they smacked me, the force of the slap caused me to bury my face deeper in the mattress.
“Get a pillow under her ass!“ yelled Robbie. “Let’s do that little shitter!“

“NNNNNOOOOOOOOO!“ I screamed out in terror. I remembered how painful it had been when Danny raped me there. I tried to scramble away but I was too weak to move very fast. Pizza-face put his hands in the middle of my back, holding me down.

“Hold still, cunt!” he said.

   They continued to smack my poor ass with their hands, each trying to out-do the other. With every smack my body would jerk and stiffen. I pleaded and begged them to stop but they wouldn't listen. My ass was on fire and red from all the abuse; you could see the imprint of fingers.
   They lifted me up and pushed a couple pillows under my hips, lifting my ass off the bed. Then I heard them having a discussion as to who would go first. I couldn’t believe it! They did rock, paper, scissors and Todd won!
   He positioned himself behind me and lubricated his cock by rubbing it all over my swollen, leaking pussy. I screamed and bawled uncontrollably as he began to push at my ass with his cock. My tight, almost virgin ass, resisted the intrusion. I was too tense for him to enter me.

   He gripped my ass cheeks firmly and I held my breath as he pressed forward more forcibly,  his cock beginning to enter my tight butt. I stiffened and my  body twitched with pain. Todd ignored my screams as he pushed into me. I then realized that I was merely a hole for the guys to do with as they wished.
  Todd raped my ass for what seemed like hours but in reality it had only been a few minutes. Ramming his hard cock up inside me, his balls banged against me. He took hold of my shoulders and pulled me back against him. I would of begged for mercy if I thought it would help but I knew better my pleas and cries would only arouse the guys even more.

    I just wanted to lock out the sounds and the thought of what they were doing to me. I tried to shut off my mind to it. The terror and shock I felt did not grow less with repetition. Feeling himself ready to cum, Todd pulled on my hair as I felt his seed blast into my ass. Mercifully, he finally pulled out, his cock making a farting noise. The guys all laughed.
   Robbie was standing there next ready to violate me again.

 "Spread your ass cheeks for me,“ he demanded.

Shamefully, I reached behind me and spread my ass cheeks for him. Tears began to flow freely once again as Robbie entered my ass. He fucked me without remorse. He pumped in and out of me hard and then with a grunt he shot a load deep inside my bowels.

   Wes quickly took his turn. In one quick thrust he was buried deep inside my ass. I felt as though I was being ripped in half. Brutally, Wes began to rape my bum with his rock hard cock. He laid his body against mine so his mouth was beside my ear, then he whispered gross things to me.
  Like, “you’re a hot tight little bitch” and “I’ll bet you’re loving it up the ass,“ and “ you’re a cum-whore.“ He really made me feel like a piece of shit. Not that I didn’t already!

  I felt his hot load as it filled my bowels. The feeling of tightness around Wes’ cock had made it impossible for him to go for more than a few minutes. As Wes pulled out of my abused ass, I felt cum streaming down the back of my legs.

   My insides felt like they were on fire but that was no concern of these animals. I closed my eyes tightly. Pizza-face was the next one. The air pushed out of my lungs as he drove into me like a piston. He bottomed out his cock in my ass and then just held himself there, enjoying the feeling of my tight behind enveloping him.

  He wrapped his fingers in my hair and yanked my head back as he began to jackhammer into me. The fronts of my thighs and my knees ached from being driven against the bed. Pizza-face let go of my hair and reached under me. He squeezed my nipples really hard, causing me more pain.
   God! I just wanted him to cum and be done! I couldn’t take anymore. He did finally cum but when he did, he pulled out of my ass at the last minute. I felt his warm jizz spray all across my cheeks and my lower back. As a final humiliation, he wiped his slimy dick off in my hair. He laughed the whole time.

   The guys stood there looking down at me. I must have been a horrible mess. I was drenched in sweat and I could feel cum and blood oozing out of my tortured ass. I could feel the muscles in my anus spasming and twitching as it tried to return to its original size. My insides felt raw and burning.
  My hair was plastered to my tear-streaked cheeks and my eyes felt all red and puffy. I could barely speak, my throat was sore from screaming.
   While Pizza-face was busy, Todd had went and got beers for all the guys. Now he pulled me up off the bed by my arm.

  “Hey, blondie! You look like you could use something to drink!“
He took his can of beer and poured some down my throat. I wasn’t used to beer and I coughed and choked.  Todd pulled the can of beer away from my lips.

   “What’s the matter? Beer too strong for you?“ laughed Todd.

   “I think we can find something else for her to drink,“ Robbie smirked as he stroked his cock back to hardness.

  I clued in to what he was meaning and I began to shake my head.

“N-n-no! Pl-please don’t make m-me do th-that!” I began to plead.

Robbie just smiled. “Oh yes, bitch! All of us!”

January 04, 2018, 10:56:25 AM
Reply #5

Offline vile8r

Todd pushed me down to my knees. Robbie moved in closer, his erection jutting out.

 "I want you to swallow my cum," he said to me. "And you better be careful with your fucking teeth. Bite me and I will knock all those pretty little teeth out of your mouth."

 Afraid that he would make good on his threat, I parted my lips to let him slip his cock inside my mouth. I gagged at the taste of his cock.

 "Lick the shaft," he instructed me. "And work your tongue along the tip."

I did as he told me, running my tongue along the length of his cock. I didn’t know at all what I was doing. I just hoped I was doing it to his satisfaction. The way he moaned, I guessed that I was.

  "Yeah, that's it cunt. Now stroke it while you suck."

   I put his dick back in my mouth and wrapped my hand around the base of the shaft. As I slid my mouth back and forth along his cock, I slowly stroked it, as he instructed. He began to mutter things about me being a “good little cocksucker” and “he’d teach me how to swallow cock”.
   I hoped that if I sucked his cock well enough he wouldn't think about raping me again. Grabbing my head he began to savagely fuck my mouth. The head of his cock hit against the back of my throat.  Robbie let out a guttural moan as he started to cum. I found myself gagging when he shot in my mouth.
  It tasted horrible and I thought I might be sick, but I held my breath as I swallowed his cum. It was the grossest thing ever! Danny hadn’t made me do this when he put his dick in my mouth so it was the first time I’d ever swallowed cum. Whatever any girl tells you about it, believe me, it’s over-rated!
  Robbie finally pulled out but my relief was short-lived. Pizza-face was there right away, looking for his turn.
  “All right,” I heard him say. “Blowjobs are my favorite! Open your jaws, bitch!”

  He sat on the edge of the bed and made me kneel in front of him. Wrapping his fingers in my hair he pushed my mouth down on his grotesque dick.  I gagged as he forced his way past my lips.
  “What’s wrong?” he sneered. “Don’t like the taste of your own ass?”

  My stomach churned as I realized that, yes, he was right! The last place his dick had been was in my butt. How sick!

I began doing to him like I did with Robbie. I tightened my lips around his shaft and slowly stroked him at the same time. His hand pulling on my hair really hurt as he forced my mouth up and down on him.

“Rub my balls too, cunt!” he snapped.

With my other hand I cupped his balls and began massaging and rubbing them. They felt all sweaty and slimy.

“That’s it, bitch,” he moaned.

Like Robbie, he eventually had to see how far he could force himself into my mouth. The head of his cock bounced against the back of my throat as he thrust his hips upward. I suddenly felt his shaft go rigid and he spurted a big gob of jizz.

He held my head as he made me swallow it all. I got most of it down but a little ran down my chin. After he pulled out he made me lick the entire thing clean.

As I caught my breath, Wes sat on the bed. He was stroking his cock.

“Okay, blondie, looks like you’re pretty good with that mouth. Let’s see what you can do for me!”

Like I said before, I had thought earlier that Wes was really hot-looking. He had short dark hair and really nice blue eyes and a cute smile. His body was, well, in teen-girl talk, ‘pretty buff‘! When I first saw him, he seemed so quiet and shy. He hardly said anything. If Danny hadn’t come onto me earlier after he rescued me from Julio, I probably would have tried flirting with Wes.
  Now, I was really disappointed in him. I never thought he would allow himself to be caught up with these other pigs. I didn’t picture him as this kind of guy.
   But now I saw that my friends at school were right. They were always saying that the quiet guys were the ones you had to watch out for. The loud-mouth schmucks and jocks were a lot of bluster and bragging sometimes when it came to girls. The quiet ones were the animals!

 Putting his hand on the back of my head, he fed his cock into my mouth. My jaws were starting to ache but I tried to ignore it. I closed my lips around him and placed my hands on his thighs. I began to bob my head up and down.
  I was learning now how to run my tongue along the shaft as I moved my mouth. I felt his body shudder with ecstasy.
“Yeah, girl. Suck it!” he gasped.

  I also learned that if I got the cock really coated with saliva, it helped to slide better in my mouth. I worked up more saliva from my throat, getting his shaft nicely lubricated. He held both hands on the back of my head as I sucked him vigorously.
  He pushed his hips up to match my sucking motions. I could hear him breathing heavily as he watched my mouth move up and down on him. He started moving his hips faster and suddenly shoved my head down on him, the head of his cock pushing into my throat.
  I tried to pull back but he was too strong. I struggled for breath as he cut off my air. His cock gave a couple twitches and more cum was shot down my throat. I heard Wes moaning loudly as he unloaded into my stomach. Again, like Pizza-face, he made me run my tongue along his cock and clean it off after he slipped out of my mouth.
  I panted and gulped for air. I heard Todd set his beer down and come over to the bed.
  Oh God! Not him now! I thought to myself.

“Time for a good tonsil fuck!” he snarled. “Gonna give you something to remember me by, sweetie!”

 He grabbed me by the wrists and pulled me onto the bed, throwing me down on my back. I had a bad feeling about what he was going to do. He climbed on the bed and began to straddle me, placing his knees on either side of my head. He bent down, pushing his cock down towards my mouth. His large body hovered over me.
  He settled his hips down, his cock forcing its way past my open lips. Holding my wrists above my head, he began fucking my mouth. His thick cock drove into my mouth and pushed into my throat. I bucked and kicked my legs, fighting for air. He was suffocating me!
  Todd pulled back and shoved in again. My throat muscles screamed in pain as they tried to stretch around his thickness. His cock head was lodged firmly and he twisted his hips. I could literally feel my throat bulging outward.
  As he proceeded to fuck my mouth, my vision began to get blurry and I felt like I was on the edge of unconsciousness. So this is how it’s going to end, huh? He’s going to choke me to death with his cock and they’ll throw my body in the lake! Tears began to stream down my face.
  It seemed like forever as he banged my throat. I tried to suck air in through my nose. Slobber was running down my chin. Mercifully, he pulled out and I was able to take in large gulps of air. But suddenly I was hit square in the face with a blast of cum.
  It blew up my nose and coated my eyes. I could hear all the other boys laughing. It felt like a gallon of cum had been deposited on my face. It was everywhere! Even in my hair! As he got off the bed, Todd grabbed a handful of my hair and used it like a rag to wipe himself off.

A couple of them pulled me up off the bed and dragged me towards the van door. They threw me out and I landed in the sand on my hands and knees. I heard Todd come up behind me and grab my hair. He yanked my head back.
“Okay, bitch. Get the fuck out of here! And you don’t tell anyone what happened here, understand? Or we come and find you and then things get really bad! This was all your doing. You wanna party with the big boys, this is what’s gonna happen!”
I remembered what Danny had said to me earlier. I wasn’t wanting to ever run into these people again! I nodded slowly and said, ”Y-y-yes! I un-un-under….st-stand!”
  I slowly began to stand up. My legs were so weak but I managed to get on my feet.

"Where's Nikki?" I mumbled.

"Who?" asked Robbie.

"M-my friend," I said. I was trying not to sob.

"Oh right, chick with the tits. Check back behind the lifeguard's locker. Think I saw them taking her over there earlier. Probably did some bouncing on those big tits!" said Robbie.

The guys all laughed, like it was some sick joke. I didn’t like the sound of that. I didn’t know who “them” was, but I had a sinking feeling that Nikki had ended up in much the same situation as me.

“See you later, sweet ass!” one of them yelled. I had my back to them and didn’t acknowledge their comments as I walked away.

“Thanks for the fuck! You were great!” I recognized that as Pizza-face’s voice. “Call me sometime. We’ll go to a movie!”

I staggered through the sand as I headed back towards the lifeguard locker that was a hundred yards up the beach. Sure enough, I found Nikki there. She was sitting up against the back of the locker, her knees drawn up under her chin. She was a mess. Her hair was sticky and matted, and she had cum all over her—it was streaked across her skin, matted in her hair, and leaking out of her pussy and ass. Her thighs and legs were a mass of bruises.
  I stood frozen, looking down at her. I realized I probably looked about the same. Nikki was just staring straight ahead and tears glistened as they ran down her cheeks. She was shivering in the cool night air.
I kneeled next to her and shook her shoulder.

 "Emily?" she said weakly.

"Come on, Nikki, we gotta get out of here," I said.

 “Th-there was five of them. Th-they wouldn’t stop! They hurt m-me! I called for you, Emily! I CALLED! Why d-didn’t you c-come?” She began sobbing hysterically.

I hugged her tightly. “I-I’m so sorry, Nikki. But th-they had me too! I’m s-so sorry I made you c-come here! It’s all m-my fault!”

I helped her to her feet and we both picked our way down to the lake shore where we had left the canoe. It was getting cold and we needed to find some clothing.
We made do with the t-shirts that we left in the canoe. I had to do most of the paddling despite my aching body, because Nikki was barely conscious, and every stroke hurt. I don’t know how long we paddled, but I was never so happy to see that shitty little cabin as I was that night.


January 06, 2018, 04:25:56 PM
Reply #6

Offline gscmar64

Damn what a time for my electronics to crash on me. Almost missed this great opus! very well written and a great scenario. Is there any chance you can get permission from Littlebree to continue say the guys comes looking to party with them and their mothers before going away?

January 11, 2018, 10:01:29 AM
Reply #7

Offline vile8r

I haven't seen lttlebree online in a very long time, she seems to have disappeared again. But when she was around before, she basically gave me carte blanche to do as I pleased with any of her stories. She even sent me a few ideas that were hers, and told me I was free to use them if I wanted. I haven't done anything with them yet, but maybe someday. If I do, I will credit them as lttlebree's ideas, but she told me to write them as I please.

February 17, 2018, 01:48:49 AM
Reply #8

Offline brokenwing

Vile8r it is your ability to not only write from the perspective of the perpetrator but also the victim's perspective that makes your writing so incredible and I believe the reason both men and women relate to your stories.

First you defined the initial lack of self confidence of Emily perfectly, then her excitement of a new adventure, then Danny being heroic and rescuing her and even the build up of the romantic walk alone with him.  It is completely realistic that a girl lacking self confidence would feel pretty and desired by his advances.

Even after Danny raped her if he took her home, she may have questioned herself, but no, you didn't leave it there, he then handed her overto his friends.

Lastly, you leave the reader's imagination wondering how things go from there.

Does Emily go home a wilted flower never to trust men again?  Or as each minute, day, week, month and year passes does she begin to long for what Danny and maybe even the others did to her?

While she at the time hated the vile degrading words Danny and the others said to her does she grow to need to hear those words to experience even close to a similar rush and arrousal.

Does she seek and date nice guys?  Or does she seek out other men who will treat her like crap.

It's too much for a young woman to handle, let alone a 14 year old who is experiencing her first sexual encounter.

Over the next two years does a guy her age even catch her interrest or is she only curious and stimulated by guys around Danny's age?

When she doesn't easily come to the attention of a predator does she feel the need to attract or even flirt with guys too old for her.  Then if they aren't "abusive" does she lose interest and continue to search until she finds another older guy willing to treat her like shit?

Aa always you are genius.

February 20, 2018, 06:15:45 PM
Reply #9

Offline vile8r

As always, thank you so much for your feedback brokenwing! It's great to hear from you. I have played with some ideas for continuing the story. I have even considered an idea where Nikki's ordeal is described through vivid flashback. Another idea I've had involves something between Emily and Nikki's dad, Mr. Cooper. But we shall see what transpires in the future.

February 21, 2018, 02:27:06 PM
Reply #10

Offline bulldog1975

Loved the story.  I was able to visualize the whole thing. :D

February 24, 2018, 11:47:04 PM
Reply #11

Offline brokenwing

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As always, thank you so much for your feedback brokenwing! It's great to hear from you. I have played with some ideas for continuing the story. I have even considered an idea where Nikki's ordeal is described through vivid flashback. Another idea I've had involves something between Emily and Nikki's dad, Mr. Cooper. But we shall see what transpires in the future.

The idea of Mr. Cooper maybe being the next chapter in Emily's life is a very interesting idea, but not an easy one.

Certainly when Emily and Nikki return home they are very different from who they were earlier.

The so absolutely frightening thing is that each person can react different then the other from the experience.

Certainly Mr. Cooper would likely notice a change especially his own daughter and likely her friend.

It would definitely take quite a bit of character development of Mr. Cooper, he's married with children, so going from that to a man who would find a fourteen year old sexually attractive is a huge leap.

One possibility might be "smoking cigarettes."  It could start with Emily struggling to manage her anxiety and PTSD from the rape. 

Maybe Mr. Cooper catches Emily smoking and tries to dissuade her from doing so.  BUT not too long after he sees smoke coming from behind somewhere, as he approaches he realizes it's Emily, as he gets even closer it's a joint.

He's her friend's parent, certainly he should intercede, but when he does he's shocked how Emily, who before was very obedient and listened to adult advice, numbly stands there, his words not seeming to penetrate her ears or more important her mind.

Maybe to try to get through he takes the joint from her, but then, not having smoked Pot in years he decides to try to get through to the once obedient good girl by joining her.

Maybe other things change.  In the past Emily was very body self conscious quickly covering up, tightening her robe or top of her shirt when a male approaches, now she's numb, doesn't care, doesn't cover up.  Mr. Cooper would certainly notice that. 

I find it interesting the idea where Nikki starts becoming more conservative with her body and clothes and Emily, not dressing trashy but just stops caring about her appearance.  Not being sloppy but just not careful to cover up.

Imagine wearing short shorts or a skirt but now not self conscious about how she sits, not keeping her knees together.

In a tank top or dress or top with spaghetti straps and the strap falls off her shoulder, in the past she would immediately notice it, feel it and quickly pull it back into place.  But not any more.  She's oblivious to the fact it even fell.  She's numb, doesn't notice even as the strap now on her upper arm allows the top of the outfit to slip lower and show more.

Hopefully that sparks some thoughts. 

Would love to see you, in reality write a new story, not really a new chapter but just using existing characters. 

We knew little of Mr. Cooper and Emily is a different girl.


Feel free to PM me with thoughts and ideas.

After losing my virginity to my mother's boyfriend I changed a great deal.